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Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 2/6
Again, double space. It helps the reader. XD Good addition...they all seem a little short to me...and more descriptions would be nice. I didn't see any gramatical errors. XD Keep ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: The Knot Is Like Our Love
I love this! Very intense and...passionate! Of course, I'm not good at critiquing poetry, but I liked it. Keep writing! DR
Nov 27, 2007 -
Re: Life in Vana'diel (Chapter 2)
Awesome writing style! XD I loved it! Hope to read more...I saw a few errors...but mostly gramatical. Lol. DR
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: A Winter Midnight
This is really short! Make it longer and pm me. I'll then give you an indepth review.
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Bite size Nano piece
This is good, if a bit short. XD I'm sure YOU can make it better! Lol. DR
Nov 10, 2007